tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3407305796758280400.post7855636704831020802..comments2023-10-07T04:41:18.248-06:00Comments on mckell's blog: Draft Press Release #3- CVAIAmckellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08153088490447322184noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3407305796758280400.post-47042268487603831072008-10-02T22:01:00.000-06:002008-10-02T22:01:00.000-06:00Hey McKell, to be honest, I thought you did a pre...Hey McKell, to be honest, I thought you did a pretty good job. I know that Preston said we are supposed to be more critical, but I have to be honest and say I thought you did a good job. I guess if I were to change something, I would say explain what CVAIA is closer up to the lead. The story seems a little out of order.npetershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06909673133884791773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3407305796758280400.post-49661224207232685182008-09-28T07:28:00.000-06:002008-09-28T07:28:00.000-06:00I found the press release highly uninformative. I...I found the press release highly uninformative. It didn't tell me a thing about you and Mike still dating, how your classes are going, when you're going to come visit... nothing.<BR/><BR/>Well, it does tell me one thing. You did (at least once this semester) do some homework.<BR/><BR/>We miss you guys and hope our paths cross again soon!Roeckershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15048036091415957688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3407305796758280400.post-42482510937483498352008-09-26T14:08:00.000-06:002008-09-26T14:08:00.000-06:00McKell,Your press release stinks. Ok, not really, ...McKell,<BR/>Your press release stinks. Ok, not really, just trying to make Preston happy. You did a good job getting a lot in there, but unless you already know what the investment pyramid is, the part where you talk about it would be incredibly confusing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3407305796758280400.post-18048255421962371452008-09-26T12:59:00.000-06:002008-09-26T12:59:00.000-06:00I found some errors with your quotes. Be sure to ...I found some errors with your quotes. Be sure to says who said it after the first sentence of a quote. There was a quote in there from Parker where you had more than one sentence before you wrote he said it. Also, in your header spell out three. But good job. It was written nicely!Julee_Bairdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12053127495223227421noreply@blogger.com